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Powerful Female Characters

After receiving a wonderful review from (Elionor Jones), I was particularly encouraged by her remarks about some of the female characters in Beyond The Pyre.

More on that later because according to the Readers Digest and I guess a sizable list of readers, the following female fictional characters are said to be among the best of all time. That’s quite a claim to make when I think of many others I have loved as I read their stories. Not to mention (well I will at the end of this article) a few of my own.

Elizabeth (aka Lizzie or Eliza) Bennett

Elizabeth Bennett is the witty protagonist from Jane Austen’s novel Pride and Prejudice. The second oldest of five daughters and, like the rest of her sisters, she’s not expected to marry for love, rather status and money. True to herself, she would rather stay single; a concept that was not generally acceptable at the time.

Nancy Drew

Her debut was in the 1930s but she remains one of the most iconic female characters. Conceived by Edward Stratemeyer, Nancy Drew’s character was ground-breaking because she wasn’t simply a pretty sidekick to a leading male counterpart. Instead, the bold, physically strong, and fiercely intelligent Nancy used her superior intellect to solve mysteries.

Josephine (Jo) March

Jo is a second eldest daughter and a central focus in the novel Little Women, by Louisa May Alcott.  At 15, she is strong-willed, confident, and literary. Unlike her sisters, she is outspoken and uninterested in marriage. Jo struggles with and defies society’s expectations of how women in the 19th century should carry themselves, making her one of literature’s most daring female characters.

Lisbeth Salander

My favourite on this particular list! She’s provocative, intense, and probably bi-polar but, most people she meets simply label her crazy. Lisbeth has become one of the most intriguing female characters in literature. As a lead character in Stieg Larrson’s novel The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo, she is a world-leading computer hacker with a photographic memory who fights to overcome a traumatic childhood and helps solve a complicated series of mysteries. Her uncompromising moral code can be shocking but, devastating to those who find themselves on her radar.

Hermione Granger

Frequently collects ten points for Gryffindor, but Hermione is much more than a very intelligent young woman. As the lead female character in the Harry Potter stories and in my humble opinion was superbly cast in the films.  Her keen intellect and powerful memory are consistently evident, sometimes to the dismay of her friends, who often think she’s bossy and annoying. The Muggle-born Hermione transforms from an eager, know-it-all 11-year-old to a confident, loyal, and brave heroine.

Celie

Celie is both the narrator and protagonist of the outstanding novel, The Color Purple, by Alice Walker. At the hands of her father and then, later, by her husband, Celie is a lonely, dejected, emotionally and physically mistreated victim. Through the power of love and forgiveness, Celie finds her own strength and transforms into a confident, independent, and compassionate woman.

Katniss Everdeen

Katniss Everdeen is a contemporary icon. Strong, determined, and fiercely loyal, she is a highly skilled archer and hunter who becomes a leader in the rebellion against the tyranny of the Capitol. By the end of The Hunger Games 3, Katniss becomes a reluctant hero. A girl who was never ordinary who found courage and compassion under constant life-threatening circumstances.

Arya Stark

One of the lead females in George R.R. Martin’s A Game of Thrones, Arya is a small, fiery force to be reckoned with. Tough with a capital T, the fiercely independent Arya outwardly scorns “noble” female hobbies like sewing and dancing in favour of sword fighting and horseback riding.

I think Martin must have met my youngest daughter. However, adding more of Arya’s stories might result in spoilers for some so I will be kind and stop here.

Now on to a few of my own superwomen in Beyond The Pyre. . .

“I also loved the female characters in the book! I love strong female characters, and this book was full of them. The main female characters were Catharine, from modern-day Britain, Sophie, a French Catholic supporter, and Elionor, a Catholic who supported peace between the faiths. Personally, my favourite of these characters was Elionor, and I loved the banter that went on between Elionor and her husband with regards to women’s position.

Catharine was also a strong female lead, and I liked again how Ben saw her as his equal, and the links between the two couples throughout were interesting and, often, adorable. I thought the fact that the 13th and 21st century couples mirrored each other was also a great element.

‘He knew that ventures into the spirit world could be draining, and Catharine never did things by halves.’”

Ask any writer about the value of reviews and they will tell you something on the lines of, ‘they are like gold.’ Of course they give the ego a pat on the back but they also inform us and help us to improve. Especially if the reviewers are honest about our work, which is exactly what Eleanor Jones gave me when she reviewed Beyond The Pyre; plenty to think about.

What she also gave me was a wonderful reminder relating to the personal side of me.

I was a child of the sixties brought up in a loving family with traditional values. Not much changed until I went to work at British Aerospace where I saw and worked with many women in positions of authority. Some were exceptionally independent; others accepted and bowed to the male dominated higher management. I began to challenge the status quo and found myself in frequent deep-water for doing so.

Moving on to university in the early 80’s and possibly influenced by Thatcher there was a huge increase in ‘feminism’ and sadly some of it was so extreme it turned away some men who were potential supporters. The debate on my course alone was often fiery and led to feelings of us and them.

Looking back, a little change has occurred and realistically, the 80’s explosion has settled and it at least started better recognition of women. There is still a very long way to go before real equality is achieved and I believe it needs to be approached from all aspects of life. Here’s one reason why I like to have strong female characters in my novels.

From a spiritual point of view I believe we are all equal and none are more equal than others (Sorry Mr Orwell), hence the balance between Elionor and Louis who spent much time in a Cathar community where the prevailing belief was equality. Catharine and Ben in the 21st Century practiced their own equality, or, did they carry it with them through the ages?

I’ve only mentioned two female characters but there are others for another day and some in my children’s novel Horando.

What do you think? Who is your number one female character?

I will leave you to consider the featured image that could well be Serdica from Beyond The Pyre.

 

Women Power

Somebody asked me who the strong characters in Beyond The Pyre are. Thoughts of the blacksmith Maréchal zipped through my mind but didn’t stay long because six women are undoubtably the strongest characters in the story.

Simply put, each of them knows how to manage and never runs for cover when the going gets tough and very difficult for some of them it does become.

Early in the story, Catharine’s Wicca interests and some of her knowledge is declared. Others too would be happy to be called wiccan but unfortunately in their own day, they had to be content keeping their interests quiet. There was more than enough ‘witch-hunting’ going on in their worlds without risking being called a witch on top of everything else.

To be continued . . .

Beyond The Pyre – Pen Portraits – Ben and Louis

Greetings Dear Readers,

I hope each and every one of you is well today and if you are not feeling so great, I hope you will be soon. Namaste!

This blog edition is a little on the quiet side because as I am sure you will appreciate; writing first. My focus has been very much with my next novel, Under An Ancient Name. I’m not giving away too much, except that it is set in ancient and 21st century Egypt. Keep an eye on the ‘UAAN’ tab for more info.

Ben and Louis

Catharine’s husband, freelance writer, practising Wiccan and all-round nice guy is not the character emerging from the early chapters of Beyond The Pyre. However, events move along rapidly and push him into a limelight he accepts with ease considering the blows he is dealt.

His spiritual gifts help him to free the mind of a lost soul who thanks him by leading him to Louis a 13th Century nobleman who is strongly opposed to the Cathar crusades. Louis prefers sword to pen and together but by no means the same, he and Ben have essential parts to play in Beyond The Pyre. If you are interested, mid-twenties, both are considered good looking, Ben has blond hair, blue eyes, Louis almost black hair, dark brown eyes, average height, strong build.

As you might imagine, there is a rather serious amount of writing out on the WWW about reincarnation, life after death and everything in and around so my research was considerable. See what you think of the following couple of paragraphs and I would love to hear your thoughts.

In modern times there has been plenty of research into the claims of people who say they have remembered their previous lives. One of the best known cases concerns Shanti Devi, born in Delhi in 1926. At the age of seven she told her mother that she had been alive before, in a town called Muttra. Over the next two years her recall of events increased until she was telling her parents about her previous husband, their house, and her three children. At the age of nine a complete stranger came to the door to discuss business with her father and Shanti claimed she recognised him as her husband’s cousin from her previous life.

To the astonishment of everyone the man did live in Muttra and agreed that his cousin’s wife, Ludgi, had died ten years earlier. When the husband came to visit her, Shanti recognised him immediately and flung herself into his arms. When she was taken to Muttra, she was able to direct the carriage to Ludgi’s house and identified her father-in-law sitting in front of it. She also recognised her two eldest children, but not the youngest, whose birth had cost Ludgi her life.

Read more . . .

There is a growing wealth of cases like Shanti’s that suggest reincarnation and many people are exploring ways to unlock their own lost memories. Some people have spontaneous recall but there are also professional people who will help people unlock their hidden memories. Often, ‘Past Life Therapists’ use deep relaxation sessions or hypnotic techniques to guide their client back into time. Firstly they encourage them to recall events in this life and then back into early childhood. A point comes when they can ask the subject to look to the time before their birth and recall what they see and feel. Some describe a period between lives where they live in a heavenly afterlife but many go straight to memories of past lives.

Yes, it’s true! I have told you very little about Ben and Louis. By sharing a small piece of research from one of my sources, I have given a few clues about what connected them. Is that me getting off the hook?

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Apps That Help

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Coming Soon . . .

  • Writing, Horando; Going Home – Novel for Children
  • Forthcoming novels by Steve Costello
  • Guest Posts
  • Apps that help

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Wishing you Peace, Love and Happiness always

Steve

Göreme – The Cappadocian Express

I doubt that many would argue that some of the great stories grow from real-life situations. It’s also true that some of my best writing in particular comes when I allow my thoughts to explode and race through my fingers to the keyboard or notepad.

Here’s a true short-story from my travels in Turkey with a couple of fictional characters you may have heard of.

‘This place is incredible; it’s a fairy-tale land and really ought to be in a Disney movie.’

Ben gently ran his fingers through Catharine’s hair making her shiver despite the thirty Celsius heat from the July sun in the sky of infinite possibility, not a cloud in sight.

‘I don’t think Disney filmed here but Marvel has. Just a couple of years ago they filmed parts of “Ghost Rider: Spirit of Vengeance”. Cool, huh? Nic Cage has walked here; we may walk in his footsteps.’

‘Yes really cool, I will watch out for Nic’s footprints.’ Catharine laughed and turned to hug Ben. ‘It’s one of the most beautiful places I have ever seen though and I can’t wait to stay in that hostel in the rock and visit some of those ancient churches with the frescoes.’

A mini bus with an exuberant driver took them to the hostel on the edge of Göreme.

‘We have had a lot more interest in our beautiful town since we became a UNESCO world heritage site. There is 2000 people living here and those who have hotels, shops and restaurants are doing very well during the tourist season. There is farming of course, bee-keeping too.’

‘What’s that crop in the field over there?’

The driver looked behind to his left where Catharine leaned forward pointing. The minibus swerved briefly until he brought it under control laughing.

‘Oh that’s something for their personal use. I don’t know what you call it in English.’

Catharine slid across to the empty seat behind the driver focussing her camera on the field where two women collected the crop into wicker baskets. Fiddling with the zoom menu to get a closeup of the shot, Catharine’s eyes widened when she realised what it was.

‘Ben look at this.’ He joined her behind the driver and adjusted the screen angle to get a better view. The driver carried on with his impromptu tour guiding but only a young French couple seemed to be listening. One translated when the other missed something.

‘Well if you took that enlarged image and printed it on a T-shirt, everybody would know exactly what it was.’

‘I thought it was illegal here?’

‘So did I and look what happened to the American who tried to smuggle some back to the USA.’

‘That was a bit before our time, Ben but I have seen the film.’

‘At least he did get a film deal out of it; great soundtrack too.’

Catharine glanced out of the window and quickly back at Ben. A jaw-dropping moment if ever there was. She blushed slightly, Ben noticed but fell into the beauty of her eyes; average brown but stunning with natural cognac and orange rays radiating from the iris.

‘The landscape is so,’ she paused, a smile playing on the corners of her lips, ‘it’s so, phallic.’

‘Catharine I’m shocked,’ Ben laughed. ‘But hey, you are right and, they are enormous. Look, that one has a door and windows.’

The driver continued imparting his knowledge of the area but none of the eight passengers heard a word. They were chatting and giggling in four languages; no translation was required. They tuned back into his words when the minibus slowed and turned into a circular area surrounded by two large, albeit phallic structures with a connecting single story wooden shack that served as reception, bar and restaurant.

‘Here we are, “The Göreme hotel for backpackers,” I know the manager personally and I can assure you that you will be well looked after.’

He wished each individual a good stay as they alighted and headed toward the reception where a young man and woman seemed to be running everything.

‘Couples or singles?’ The man asked and, after a series of nods and gestures confirmed in his soft Australian accent that they were all couples. ‘No problem, we have space for you all in the second dorm, that’s second on the right when you go outside. Just hand in your passports before you go over there and choose your space.’

With some reluctance, everybody gave him their passports and filed across to the assigned building. Well it hadn’t been built exactly; it was a leftover from prehistoric volcanic eruptions when layers of soft rock were covered in volcanic ash and limestone. Regardless of first impressions, these structures struck awe into the minds of visitors. They were extraordinary and people had made them their homes or hiding places from religious persecution for over 3000 years.

Catharine had already started making friends and was animatedly chatting to the French woman. Ben and her partner followed behind with the bags. Catharine turned to face them, laughing.

‘It seems we have dirty minds my love. The French call these structures demoiselles coiffées.’

Ben look puzzled.

‘Ladies with styled hair,’ Luc, the Frenchman at Ben’s side translated. The two couples enjoyed their varied descriptions and bonds began to form. None realised how close those bonds were going to be until they followed the internal staircase carved into the rock to the first floor and found three open chambers with two zipped together sleeping bags laid out in one.

‘Well, this takes shared accommodation to a new level,’ Ben joked. ‘Is that hole in the floor the toilet?’

‘Ben don’t be so crude. You had better remember where it is because you might find the fast lane to the bathroom if you get up during the night and forget it’s there. The bathroom is on the ground floor. Didn’t you notice when we came in?’

‘OK, noted thanks my lover. Although, there may not be much loving going on here It’s rather, public and very cosy.’

In a happy, we’ve been friends for year’s atmosphere; the two couples chose their respective chambers and lay their sleeping bags on roll mats, collected everything of value and went back to the bar where they ordered a beer each before sitting at a table on the veranda to watch the sunset and consider whether to have a kebab or a bean burger and salad for dinner.

Lost in the sunset that turned the landscape with its accentuated demoiselles coiffées into a glowing orange otherworld, they missed the closing time of the restaurant and after two half litre bottles of beer each decided to sleep their hunger away. Catharine hardly slept.

Images of screaming soldiers and the silent running of the pursued flashed through her mind. A man held her hand, pulling her forward when it would have been easier to lie down and let fatigue and the end of a spear give her respite. She saw somebody fall behind and moments later that final scream and pre-out-of life cry urged her forward again.

‘Run my love, run. We will reach the tunnel to Derinkuyu soon. We will be safe then, they will never find us.’

The man was a Greek Christian named Thycho, his wife Melitta. They had been running from the Muslim invaders since early afternoon, six hours dodging arrows, hiding in small caves, running. The heat was unbearable but they had no choice but to live or die. Death wasn’t an option yet, they had to run, even though they didn’t agree with Christian or Muslim. They lived with Christians so they had to run for their lives, all because followers of each religion found the others distasteful.

They found the tunnel and disappeared into the labyrinth of the underground city, exhausted and bruised but alive.

‘It’s only taken me a minute to tell you about that dream, Ben. But I was there, I know I was. Running from those soldiers on the white horses, six long, exhausting hours when I should have been sleeping, instead I was running for my life and I remember every fall and the screams of those who were not so lucky. It was hell, Ben.’

Over a plate full of flatbread, cheese and honey, Ben looked sympathetically at Catharine. It wasn’t unusual for her to make connections with Spirit but lately, her connections had become extremely vivid. Compared to Catharine, Ben was an absolute amateur and he was never sure how to offer help other than by listening.

He reached across the table and took her hand. ‘I understand that you’re exhausted but let’s go with the plan of the day and visit Derinkuyu. Just go with the flow, it might help.’

Many times during the visit Catharine stopped in her tracks and looked around an underground passage, room or chapel. Her eyes far away as though transported elsewhere. She drifted around dreamlike and found that she couldn’t distinguish past from present when she and Ben talked about the incredible underground city while they travelled back to Göreme with the enthusiastic driver from the day before.

Back at the Göreme hotel, they joined the French couple and another from Germany on the veranda and politely declined sharing the joint they were passing around.

‘We saw plenty growing in the fields not far away,’ Ben commented to Luc.

‘It’s very cheap too,’ Luc added, ‘the manager sells it, you should talk to him if you need some.’

The manager was leaning on one of the roof support posts smoking a Marlborough cigarette.

‘I gave him a packet of Marlborough for two joints; that’s all.’

Ben and Catharine eased into the relaxed atmosphere and made sure they ordered food before it became too late like the day before. Chat was pleasant they learned a few French and German phrases from their companions until two police cars with blue lights flashing and full beamed headlights blinded them and destroyed the sunset.

Four dark shadows got out of the two cars and in twos went directly to the French couple. The manager walked across nodded at the officers and handed them two Bordeaux-red French passports. Without a word, the officers, one on each side of the French couple forcibly removed them from their seats, collected their belongings from the manager and forced one into the backseat of each car. Closed the doors and drove away, blue lights still flashing.

That was the last they heard of them and no information was forthcoming. Catharine was violently sick.

© All Rights Reserved – Steve Costello, 2017

Thought for the day…

If you don’t like something, change it. If you can’t change it, change your attitude. – Maya Angelou

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